Chapter I

It was a summer day, every one decided to go in the closest beach on Maledik sea. Gabriel stayed at home, he didn't wanted to waste his time with the childish games he wanted to learn how to fight with a sword. Maybe he saw something coming and he was preparing for battle. His Brother Mihael was 3 years older then him and no one was saying they are brothers, they where very different but their mutual cause was the same... Return the glory of Maced El's... In the past there where two Longoria Kingdoms but one nation. Long time ago, one Longorian King Privalas Ale The Great, united half of the El world then known, but after his dead, all kingdom was divided between the Orcs they used the situation and grab the territory. 2000 years after the Longorian tribe succeed to retain origin and identity. Gabriel and Mihael was a Longorian El's. Gabriel was keen to weapons mastery, he wanted swords the most his desire was to learn how to fight with two swords. Mihael was more into magics, he was learning the magic of nature....

Its a new era of writing

Its a new era of writing... Tolkien maybe started it but now its her reincarnation....Many authors are trying to create something similar like Tolkien world but he invented all that is necessary in that point of view...you can create you can explore, but at the end you are in his world...

This is a part of Tolkien world in Lord of The Rings:

Orcs and hobbits are probably the two literary creatures for which J.R.R. Tolkien is best known.
Everybody loves hobbits, and everyone hates Orcs. They were actually more vile and nasty in his
earlier literature than they turned out to be in THE HOBBIT and THE LORD OF THE RINGS.
One never hears of an Orc committing rape, but in "Lay of Leithian" that was one of their
favorite tactics. Orcs were also fond of tying their prisoners to trees and torturing them to death.
Tolkien's Orcs are a mixture of pitiful savagery and abandoned corruption. They represent the
worst aspects of mankind's darker nature.
What did Orcs look like?
Here is what I know about how Orcs looked:
Orcs and goblins are supposedly one and the same thing in Tolkien, but he describes them quite
differently in THE HOBBIT (where they are goblins, mostly, with only one or two Orc
references) and in THE LORD OF THE RINGS (where they are Orcs, mostly, with only one or
two goblin references).
Here is what Tolkien says of "goblins" in THE HOBBIT:
...The goblins were very rough, and pinched unmercifully, and chuckled and laughed in their
horrible stony voices....
...The goblins began to sing, or croak, keeping time with the flap of their flat feet on the stone,
and shaking their prisoners as well.... now the goblins took out whips and whipped them with a
swish, smack!, and set them running as fast as they could in front of them....
There in the shadows on a large flat stone sat a tremendous goblin with a huge head, and armed
goblins were standing round him carrying the axes and the bent swords that they use. Now
goblins are cruel, wicked, and bad-hearted.
These wicked and bad-hearted goblins were the sort to eat ponies, to light fires and dance around
them, and to complain about the savagery of the weapons used against them. Cruel as they were,
they were drawn as caricatures for the sake of providing a terrifying amusement in the story.
And except for the flat feet and the Great Goblin's huge head Tolkien never really provided a
description of what the goblins looked like in THE HOBBIT. Some carried swords, and others
carried spears. They wore helmets and used shields, too. Goblins were fond of fire and relied on
torches in their caverns, so they don't seem to have been very good at seeing in the dark.